Hmm. I'm a (b) kind of guy, I suppose. The "; and" construction probably wouldn't occur to me; I think I'd reject it as redundant: one or the other sufficing. (c) certainly has the terse ring of the first-person crime novel. (d) is ghastly - I can't be sure what the last bit is referring to - presumably the forehead. I'm not wild about (e) for similar reasons.
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Date: 2005-09-18 09:12 pm (UTC)Mike